Questions For Active Reading #5

Now that I saw how Murray indentifies the certain information, audience, form, structure, developement, dimension, and voice for writers to examine when critically reading their drafts I would change my essay by including more specific information, directing my essay to a specific audience, make sure my essay is in persuasive form, and also ask for help from better writers to make greater improvement on my essay. No additional changes as I read the essay aloud to see if my "ears experience with language". The additional information does influence how I read the quotes and listen to the speakers. It gives a stronger source of where the information comes from.